This is the kitchen of my family. It’s big and nice. Look! My mother is cooking in it. This is a microwave and that is a stove. There is a big table here. There are many things on it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh, they’re strawberries. And what are those? They are grapes.
【要領點評】
這篇作文的題目是“在廚房”里,作者根據(jù)自己家的廚房情況。介紹廚房里有微波爐和電爐,有一張大桌子和桌子上的物品等,以及媽媽在做飯,非常真實。
小朋友們,可以從觀察自己身邊的事、物寫起,利用所學的句子,描述身邊熟悉的東西來訓練習作。